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Jerusalem Walks

they kill
lie down quietly far from life.
the movement of only air,
BREATHING
while he walks on the world, the
City of Water.
he held the messages
is not moving
two – doors
up and down
first floor with
several safety walls,
     ancient society sends you away.
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You know that thing where you take random words and phrases cut out of magazines and such, and put them together so that they make some sembelence of sense?

...

Probably you don't. But it's something my teachers make me do all the time in English, and I did one today that I actually liked.

It started out randomly, but about the point I got to the 'walk on water' part, I decided I was making it (not nessasarily about, but connecting to) Jesus & his life/death.

Of course, as always, you don't have to interpret it my way. It's free for all.

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:iconblondestar-4ever:
i thought Megan did that!?

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I'VE MOVED TO A NEW ACCOUNT!!!~ContagiousPixie
:iconkimmy--kins:
She did, and then let me take credit. Lol.

(Don't worry, I actually asked!)

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We can be the generation that no longer accepts that an accident of latitude determines whether a child lives or dies. But will we be that generation? ~Bono
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Music can change the world because it can change people. ~ U2
:iconblondestar-4ever:
o lol, it sounds diff. from what i remember...did you change it a bit?

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I'VE MOVED TO A NEW ACCOUNT!!!~ContagiousPixie
:iconkimmy--kins:
Yepperz I did, Megan said I could, too. I kind of changed it so drastically it's nothing like what Megan wrote, it's not even the same thing...and that's why I didn't give her credit in the A/N.
)Plus, she said she didn't even want credit!)

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We can be the generation that no longer accepts that an accident of latitude determines whether a child lives or dies. But will we be that generation? ~Bono
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Music can change the world because it can change people. ~ U2
:iconblondestar-4ever:
lol i see, i see.:D

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I'VE MOVED TO A NEW ACCOUNT!!!~ContagiousPixie
:iconkimmy--kins:
Yepp.

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We can be the generation that no longer accepts that an accident of latitude determines whether a child lives or dies. But will we be that generation? ~Bono
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Music can change the world because it can change people. ~ U2

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